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Ethan by =mbbbbb:iconmbbbbb:

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"The face of an angel and the body of a god." One of the most popular guys in his school (and one of the biggest too!), Ethan began his bodybuilding training three years ago, at the age of fourteen. Although his impressive muscles did help to boost his self-confidence, he remains a rather shy boy. His parents and friends think he has the potential to compete at least on a regional level, but as yet they have failed to convince him doing so.
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Partially based on a pic of Dennis James: [link]

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=MoeGoof May 10, 2009, 8:00:48 AM
You know your muscle groups. It's evident in your attention to detail. Great job on the arm structure. But his hand looks deflated. It's as if the detail started with the arm, then to his face, and the shirt, but you kinda gave up with his hand. I don't know if you struggled with his hand, it kind looks like you did with the fingers. I would suggest photographing your own hand and using that as a guide. I've done the same thing for my 3D to help with structure issues. All in all I'd love to see this same detail to the muscle as to the rest of the items in this piece. Bring the realism to a new level by emphasizing that which we don't expect - the texture of his pants for example. And as always you know I'm a huge fan so consider this just a suggestive critique.
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~darkone300 May 10, 2009, 3:06:46 AM
for just three years training he sure has grown, and the whole shy thing is nice bit of a gentle giant type, nice:)

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tis, my believe we should all live in harmony. (but i also believe that when the vegetables and fruit rise up and develop brains, understanding and a great sense of irony th the vegans and the crossclassing vegetarians will get eaten so what do i know?)
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Mood: Joy ~chocomus May 10, 2009, 4:21:18 AM
maybe he thinks he need to grow more before competing. I wouldn't stop him from growing more :D
HOT!

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The internet is for porn!
-Trekkie-

In the dA FC's I'm Naruto, the RamenKage =^w^=
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~NewberryChucks May 10, 2009, 4:50:37 AM
Whoa.

Nice! I guess you got more patient with penciling this one ;)...

Cuz this looks more defined than usual :love:...

What a waste! Those ripped, huge muscles!... The crowd will never get to see them :(

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... For if I had but one last day with you, I shall chase after the sinking sun, to be with you even for a second longer...
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~jackedarm May 10, 2009, 7:23:19 AM
Looks like he could walk off the page. Now wouldn't that be interesting? VERY nice work.
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Mood: Love =bradykins May 10, 2009, 8:58:48 AM
Wow, he's perfect.

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My toes are to white for Flip-Flops!
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=mbbbbb May 10, 2009, 9:58:21 AM
Uh, thanks I guess. ^^

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Operative: "You know what your sin is, Mal?"
Mal: "Oh hell. I'm a fan of all seven."
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=mbbbbb May 10, 2009, 10:00:33 AM
Thanks for him! ;)

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Operative: "You know what your sin is, Mal?"
Mal: "Oh hell. I'm a fan of all seven."
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=mbbbbb May 10, 2009, 10:00:43 AM
Thanks!

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Operative: "You know what your sin is, Mal?"
Mal: "Oh hell. I'm a fan of all seven."
:iconmbbbbb:
=mbbbbb May 10, 2009, 10:07:53 AM
Never say never! Maybe it's just a matter of finding the right person who will know how to convince him! :)

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Operative: "You know what your sin is, Mal?"
Mal: "Oh hell. I'm a fan of all seven."
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